2. Thank you for your letter dated 14 February 2010 …
3. We were delighted to receive your letter of 14 February 2010 …
4. Further to our telephone conversation last month …
5. We have heard from … that you …
6. We have noticed your job advertisement in … dated …
7. We were pleased to know about your interest in …
Main paragraph:
1. We are writing to confirm our wish to take part in …
2. I am writing to confirm our wish to apply for the position of …
3. Would you please inform us (let us know) as soon as possible if …
4. We would like to have further details about …
5. In connection with this …
6. We are attaching some information about …
Concluding paragraph:
1. We look forward to your early reply.
2. We look forward to hearing from you soon.
3. Your prompt answer would be appreciated.
4. Thank you for your time and trouble.
5. If you have any questions, feel free to contact us.
6. Please do not hesitate to write if you require any additional information.
XI. Speak on the topic “Writing Business Letters”.
APPENDIX 1
BUSINESS LETTERS
Amelie Mesimaut Office Manager MOC Ltd
12 Fairground Road
London W5 8GD
England, UK
5 March 2009
VOG Catering
Chepstow Place
London Wll 9GL
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to apply for the post of Office Administrator as advertised in The Tribune on 21 February, 2009.
I came from France but I have been living in England for the last four years. I did an office management course at West London College of Further Education and since then I have been working as an Office Manager for a mail order company in central London.
I have experience in dealing with customers and liaising with a dispatch department, because at present these are my duties. However, I am very interested in working as an Office Administrator because this would give me an opportunity to be responsible for a team of employees.
I am enclosing my resume and hope that you will find my experience and qualifications suitable for the post.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully
Amelie Mesimaut
Kira Spraut
2544 South Fruitsnake Road,
Row Placid, Indiana 54267, USA
May 4, 2009
Mr. Robert T. Smith
Vice President
Indiana Petroleum Company
1143 Broad Street,
Row Placid, Indiana 47786, USA
Dear Mr. Smith:
Having served for several years as a secretary of a private business, I would like to apply for the position of executive secretary, which you advertised in the Row Placid Journal, April 24, 2009.
As a secretary with Kenley Corporation here in Row Placid I was directly responsible to Mr. Haddican, the company’s owner. In addition to typing, filing and taking dictation, I was responsible for scheduling all the Mr. Haddican’s appointments and telephone calls.
Generally, I did everything to make Mr. Haddican’s heavy responsibilities easier. Thus I am familiar with the duties of executive secretary and believe I am prepared to anticipate and meet all your expectations.
I would appreciate your giving me the opportunity to discuss my qualifications in person. I would be happy to come for an interview at your convenience, and I can be reached after 5 p.m. at 772 1747.
Sincerely yours
Kira Spraut
John Bextor
23 Long Lane
Bickley Surrey,
Bedford MK 40
England, UK
23 March 2009
Personnel Manager
Harper & Grant Ltd.
8 Great West Road
London W 25 England
Dear Sir,
I am writing to ask you if you have a vacancy for a Market Analyst.
I am twenty-two years old and have been working in the Sales Department of the Bedford Pharmaceutics Company for the past two years. I am studying Marketing and Business Management at Bedford University and wish to complete my course there, which has another two years to run.
The only reason for my seeking new employment is that Bedford Pharmaceutics is moving shortly to another area in the north-west, where its main offices and laboratories are already located.
If there is some chance of a vacancy occurring in the nearest future, I would greatly appreciate being given an interview. My present employers would gladly give a reference. I expect your early reply.
Yours faithfully
John Bextor
David Simons
12 Daw Lane, Cregagh
County Antrim, Belfast, BT6, Northern Ireland, UK
21 February, 2009
General Manager
Short Brothers plc
32, Tulse Hill Drive
London, SW11, England, UK
Dear Sir,
I am writing to apply for the post of Personnel Manager at Short Brothers plc that was advertised in the “Sunday News” on January 15, 2009.
From 1990 to 1994 I studied Aerospace engineering at the University of Cambridge and graduated with Bachelor’s degree. The main degree course was concerned with basic mechanical engineering, but there were also a number of optional courses available. I selected Aircraft structures, Aeroelasticity and Electrotechnology and had to submit a short dissertation “Physical configuration of the craft”.
On leaving University I was a student for an year at the North York Business College, where I was successful in obtaining diploma in Industrial Management. Courses at this college covered a wide field relevant to the management studies in general, and I was able to supplement my theoretical knowledge with a great deal of practical experience in office management and personnel selection. I took all available opportunities for improving my knowledge of theory and practice in this field.
From July 1995 till September 1998 when I left Business College I was employed as a Deputy Personnel Officer with Mr. James Bradley, at Leeds factory. I enjoyed the work for Bradley’s Co very much, as it kept me closely in touch with both engineering and management. But after four years’ experience there, wishing any prospects of promotion I applied for the position of Personnel Manager with Belfast Engineers Ltd. I began to work there in September 1998 and am still employed in the same position. The work is absorbing, but now I feel that at this stage of my career I want to have more responsibility in a large and respectable company.
I hope that my education and professional experience will be enough to apply for the position of Personnel Manager at Short Brothers plc.
I enclose a copy of my resume, the names and addresses of two people who are prepared to act as my referees.
Yours faithfully
David Simons
Pavel Mikhalyov
Moscow Publishing Ltd
23, Lenin Prospekt, Moscow, 101111, Russia
5 September 2009
Nick Jonsom
New York Times
620 Eighth Avenue
New York, NY 10018, USA
Dear Sir/Madam,
With reference to your letter of 30 May and in confirmation of our conversation with Mr. Ross we would like to let you know that we appreciate your interest and are prepared to send highly qualified specialists within 3 months from the date of signing the relevant contract. You will find a list of specialists attached.
We would like you to note that the conditions according to which we are sending our specialists are as follows:
1. The Customer at his own expense will provide the specialists during their stay in New York with:
a) adequately furnished offices and living accommodation with air conditioners and refrigerators;
b) transport facilities for business trips;
2.The Customer will reimburse the Supplier, Moscow Publishing Ltd, for the following expenses:
c) monthly salaries of the specialist and also paid leave;
d) air travel expenses for the specialists and their families, tourist (economy) class from Moscow to New York and back;
3. Insurance of the specialists in Russia against professional risks and accidents during their stay in New York.
4. Adequate medical service including hospitalization, if necessary, will be covered by insurance.
5. Payment will be made in accordance with the existing Trade and Payment Agreement between Moscow Publishing Ltd. and American Airlines Plc. The Customer will undertake to open an irrevocable confirmed and divisible Letter of Credit valid until the Contract has been executed and for the amount shown in the Contract. Payment will be effected quarterly against invoices drawn up by the Supplier.
All the other terms and conditions will be stated in our Draft Contract.
Your early reply would be appreciated.
Yours faithfully
Pavel Mikhalyov
Personnel Manager
Encl: A list of specialists to be sent to American Airlines Plc.
Mary Hopes
5 Torber Road
Liverpool, England, UK
25 August 2009
Beldrof Advertising Ltd
251 Massel Street
Liverpool, England, UK
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to apply for the position of secretary, which was advertised in today’s “News”.
I took my O-levels in English, History, Geography and French at the Liverpool Blue Coat School and then studied secretarial and commercial subjects at St. Edward’s College. Since leaving that college, I have been working for an advertising company in Liverpool. For the past two years I have been a secretary to the Assistant Manager, Marketing Department. For the personal reasons, however, I would like to find employment in the Tilport area.
I enclose a copy of my certificate of St. Edward’s College. I also give you the names and telephones of my referees for information as to my character and ability. You may also apply to my present employers if you wish.
I hope that the information I have provided in this letter and enclosures are sufficient for you purposes. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully
Mary Hopes
Encl: certificate of St. Edward’s College (copy), referees (telephones, addresses)
Alexander Somov
RS Communications
40, Sovetskiy Prospekt
Kemerovo, 650001, Russia
January 21, 2009
Frank Dorke
Personnel Manager
CCS Link Ltd
30, Collins Bay Road, Reddendale
Kingston, K7M, Canada
Dear Mr. Dorke,
Training of personnel for RS Communications in Canada
In accordance with Contract № 121 and the Memorandum of January 17, 2009 we are sending a list of 35 specialists expected in Canada for training. It is to be noted that the list includes the first group of the specialists to be trained in your country. The second and third groups of specialists will be sent in May and August respectively. It would be appreciated if you inform us of the approximate date when you would like to have them in Canada.
We note that the payment for training our specialists will be made by RS Communications according to the Article 11 of the Contract upon receipt of a request from your company.
We have to let you know that so far we have not received your request. We also bring to your notice that within a month from the date of signing the Contract your company undertook to submit to RS Communications its proposals on the number of the trainees and the period of training in Canada.
We have not yet received the above document from your company. Consequently, we are not in a position to submit an application for our specialists’ training.
We kindly request you to arrange for the earliest submission of your proposals.
Yours faithfully
Alexander Somov
Sophia Kalme
Managing Director
Chocolate Shop Ltd
12, Ulitsa Pirogova
Novosibirsk, 630090, Russia
October 21, 2009
Stella Lincey
General Manager
Lollipop Confectionary Ltd
23, Hampton Hill,
London, TW12, England, UK
Dear Mrs. Lincey,
With reference to your letter of August 8, 2009 and in confirmation of our telephone conversation with Mr. Ripley we would like to inform you that we are ready to send a group of 10 specialists to your country to study the possibility of the plant construction for confectionary production as well as to draw up the Feasibility Report on the project. We feel it necessary to bring to your notice that our specialists can go to your country within two months from the date of signing the contract.
It is understood that our specialists will be sent on the basis of the following general conditions.
1. The Customer is to reimburse the Supplier for air travel expenses of the specialists, tourist class from Novosibirsk to London and back.
2. The Customer is expected at his own expense to provide the specialists with adequately furnished offices and living accommodation as well as with the transport facilities for business trips.
All other terms and conditions will be sent to you later.
Yours faithfully
Sophia Kalme
Sarah Delly
Assistant Manager
Pinetour Ltd
15, Manhattan Avenue
Brooklyn, 11203, New York, USA
April 28, 2009
Clara Sipovich
Manager of International Department
Tomsk State University
108, 36 Prospekt Lenina
Tomsk, 634050, Russia
Tel. +7(3822)52-96-44
Dear Mrs. Sipovich,
Vocational Training
We have received your letter dated April 10, 2009 asking us to reduce the amount we charge for each trainee as you find it rather high. At the same time you refer to other companies who charge less for similar services. In this connection, we regret to have to advise you that we are in no position to reduce the sum of ten thousand rubles as it runs counter to our usual practice.
We also feel that the following should be brought to your notice. All our actual expenses (including three meals a day, hotel and local transport expenses) per month for each trainee amount to ten thousand rubles. With regard to your reference to other companies we would like to make it clear that they do not always provide all the above services.
Anyway, we are ready to go over this point again. Besides, we would like you to submit a list of trainees two months before their arrival in the USA.
We are looking forward to your early reply.
Yours faithfully
Sarah Delly
Peter Kopelman
Professor
St George’s, University of London
Cranmer Terrace
London SW17 0RE, England, UK
September 13, 2009
Michael Sorby
Professor
Cardiff University
Cardiff, CF10 3XQ, Wales, UK
Dear Dr. Sorby:
I am happy to provide the information you requested regarding Kim Rowland, with understanding that this information will be confidential.
Mrs. Rowland has been a student and then a tutor at St George’s, University of London since September 2002.She has always been willing to work odd hours, including weekends, and she has proven to be a hardworking and trustworthy employee, and an enthusiastic scientist.
Therefore, I can recommend Mrs. Rowland without any hesitation for the position of Laboratory Superior at your Department.
Sincerely yours
Peter Kopelman
Professor
Sam Rimes
Engineer
PG Times Ltd
102, 9 Narrow Street
Stockton, CA, 10256, USA
November 11, 2009
James Kwilly
Managing Director
Duval Electronics Inc
404, 45 Castle Street
Stockton CA 10256 USA
Dear Mr. Kwilly:
I am writing to complain about the service that I have received from your sales department.
I ordered a new 756 photocopier and was promised that it would be delivered within seven days. That was three weeks ago! When I phoned your Customer Service Department yesterday, the receptionist was very rude and unhelpful. She refused to take my name and then eventually she told me that she would ask you to phone me back. You never did!
As you can imagine, I am very unhappy with the quality of service that I have received from your company. I have been a customer of yours for ten years and have never had cause to complain.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely yours
Sam Rimes
Engineer
Vladimir Tushko
Export-Import Manager
Kot & Pyos Co.
101, 25 Ul. Harkovskaya
Kiev, 01102, Ukraine
25 February, 2009
Pet Products Ltd
2, 180 London Road
London, EX4 4JY, England, UK
Dear Sirs,
We read your advertisement in the “Pet Magazine” of 25 December 2008. We are interested in buying your equipment for producing pet food. Would you kindly send us more information about this equipment:
- price-list
- dates of delivery
- terms of payment
- guarantees
- if the price includes the cost of equipment installation and our staff training.
Our company specializes in distributing pet products in Ukraine. We have more than 50 dealers and representatives in different regions and would like to start producing pet food in Ukraine. If your equipment meets our requirements, and we receive a favourable offer, we will be able to place a large order for your equipment.
Your early reply would be appreciated.
Yours faithfully
Vladimir Tushko
Export-Import Manager
Kelly Johnson
Marketing Manager
King Arto Ltd
12 New Fetter Lane
London, EC4P 4EE, England, UK
Tel. +44 (0) 20 7040 88 70
July 26, 2009
Bob Jeeps
Export Manager
Guan Po Plc.
1221 Saks Avenue
New York, NY 10020, USA
Dear Mr. Jeeps,
One of our buyers visited your stand at the London Exhibition last week. He had a brief discussion with your Marketing Manager and we would now like to make further inquiries about your full product range.
Could you please send us the following as soon as possible:
- a catalogue and current price list of all your export products;
- a copy of your most recent company report;
- any sample products that are available.
We would also like one of your representatives to visit us here. We would also appreciate if you ask your sales manager to contact us to discuss this.
We look forward to hearing from you soon
Yours sincerely,
Kelly Johnson
Marketing Manager